Sunday, October 30, 2022

Sipra'S diary:Prompt from Chocolate(Hamilton Project) Oct29/2022>"Broken Heart"(Poem)









 #1.   Broken Heart  Sipra Roy          W=.108       //L=20.                                     

Broken heart ?A phrase of great literal fallacy

Unless heart is made of glass metal or plastic

An array of cards in gallery, 

With the image of oozing red heart 

Pierced by arrow at the center :

Symbols  juvenile romantic love in flavour!


But random  use of  the image  turns

It cheap, naive,  niche  and  ridiculous ;

Fails to impress  as 'creative art' or romantic love ;

But True love  from wounded heart  with  oozing blood 

Creates lyric for  memorable love-songs that impact life-long!

Is Broken heart taken for metaphor of intense emotion?                                       

Sipra Roy.

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